Week2B

In class we critiqued almost everyones style tile, persona. wireframe, and site map. A lot of people had similar problems with their work. Many of them were sticking to the same structure as the original web site and not thinking about what the user wants in a website. I can say that I was one of them. Some of the revisions were to put a name on the site map, put fun facts on the home page, take out the Macy's light show in about, and make the side bar elements go off of the home button. For my wireframe I needed to think about how the user will enter the site and put fun facts in there so that the user sees that it can be kid-friendly. For my style tile I needed more visual impact and work on the logo at the top of the page.